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Thursday, 1 June 2017

Persuasive Writing: BIG 4 Practice


Persuasive Writing:

I think that our class should not be doing BIG 4 Practice because about 90% of the class have actually been doing the BIG 4 properly, and I think that the other 10% of the people are not doing the BIG 4 properly so that is only about 4 people in our class.

I also think that the people who are letting our class down, should be facing the consequences because it was only them who let the class down, and when they start to muck around then it makes the whole class think they can muck around too, which only about 10% of the class actually do muck around.

My Research shows that there are only a little amount of people  that don’t follow the rules, but yet the whole class gets punished. Everyone who has been behaving well and has been following the rules, lose their privilege to have a play during interval because of those people who have misbehaved.

1 comment:

  1. That is so cool Jahnae. I think if you were to persuade me it would be a success. I think maybe if you add more punctuation, it could maybe change your writing. If you have time please look at my blog http://wisfranzenes.blogspot.co.nz/ . Anamanu

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